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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Thank you for this.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Basically, it looks OK to me, but I would suggest expanding as follows.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>In the section “Potential Risks and Threats”, I would suggest to start by pointing out that there are market failures: information asymmetry and negative externalities, and so market mechanisms are not sufficient. I would suggest referring to the excellent ISOC report on the matter (<a href="https://www.internetsociety.org/globalinternetreport/2016/">https://www.internetsociety.org/globalinternetreport/2016/</a> ).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>In the section “Norms, rules and principles for responsible State behavior”, I would suggest adding a call for states to adopt binding rules along the lines of Microsoft’s proposal for a Geneva Digital Convention, under </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>which states would agree to refrain from stockpiling or using malware.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>And I would suggest mentioning, and adding a reference to, ISOC’s forthcoming Fact Sheet on Government Hacking (the draft is at: <a href="https://isoc.box.com/s/m87dxud10i1o180dygx06dhzjdrsw3bk">https://isoc.box.com/s/m87dxud10i1o180dygx06dhzjdrsw3bk</a> ).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>You might even wish to consider supporting calls to strengthen the provisions in the ITU Constitution that go in the same direction as the proposals in the cited Fact Sheet, see for example:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><a href="http://justnetcoalition.org/2014/on_UN_HCHR_privacy_report.pdf">http://justnetcoalition.org/2014/on_UN_HCHR_privacy_report.pdf</a> </span><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Richard<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-left:solid blue 1.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 4.0pt'><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Chapter-delegates [mailto:chapter-delegates-bounces@elists.isoc.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Elizabeth Oluoch via Chapter-delegates<br><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 9, 2020 20:50<br><b>To:</b> chapter-delegates@elists.isoc.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [Chapter-delegates] Internet Society draft submission on the pre-draft report of the UN OEWG<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Dear Chapter Leaders,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>ISOC has prepared a draft response to the initial pre-draft report of the UN Open-Ended Working Group (OEWG). Please take a look at the draft response and provide any comments/suggestions/feedback by <b><u>Monday, April 13</u></b>. Kindly send them to <oluoch@isoc.org>.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>ISOC’s draft response to the pre-draft report of the OEWG is here: <a href="https://isoc.box.com/s/3jlq4vchhoz92ssr4zfdpcdl2qjz6dlq">https://isoc.box.com/s/3jlq4vchhoz92ssr4zfdpcdl2qjz6dlq</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The initial pre-draft report is here: <a href="https://unoda-web.s3.amazonaws.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/03/200311-Pre-Draft-OEWG-ICT.pdf">https://unoda-web.s3.amazonaws.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/03/200311-Pre-Draft-OEWG-ICT.pdf</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Please feel free to reach out to me with any questions. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Thank you.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Elizabeth<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Elizabeth Oluoch – Do Canto<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>International Institutional Relations, External Engagement<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Internet Society<o:p></o:p></p></div></div></body></html>